Ch 4 – 46 – Where’s the Journal?

These next few pages was not in the original rough draft Pandect.  Upon review I felt it was more important to show more of Fleance and Edgar’s interaction.

Since I enjoy playing with mood and colour so much, I also wanted to reflect the seriousness of the scene in contrast to Edgar and Noah’s scene.  Like I keep saying I wanted the background to talk to the audience as well and not just for setting description. Hopefully I convey that successfully.


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  • Kit the Coyote

    Why do I have the feeling this is Edgar’s nightmare?

  • Motoko Coeman

    He looks intimidating, but cute. But dangerous, but cute…

    • TwilightDreamer

      must keep a straight face…must keep a straight face……failing to keep a straight face!!!

  • Shiro-Kuroi Minamoto

    Yeah Edgar is in big trouble >~<

  • Subaru

    I wonder if Edgar ever thinks of his king 💋❤ he looks a bit stern but its kind of sexy

  • TwilightDreamer

    Well, if you’re wondering how you did in terms of conveying the mood through the colour…my first reaction to this page was … “meep!”.
    Lol XD in other words, well done, you set the mood perfectly… poor Edgar, I feel so worried for him….pleeeease don’t be too harsh on him Fleance, he’s already hard on himself…

    • Larkle

      I’d think he’d have gotten the hard on from Noah, actually.

      • TwilightDreamer

        *face palm* haha…couldn’t resist could you? ;P

        • Keys2tkingdom

          I don’t think anyone could resist Noa- Oh you meant resist making the joke!

          Yeah, *someone* was going to have to make that joke. Jokes like that are like a low hanging fruit that is perfectly ripe – it’s to perfect to pass up on.

          • TwilightDreamer

            lol ^_^ true that…about the joke AND Noah ;P

          • Morbidprince

            hahaha i’m just happy someone make that joke!

        • Larkle

          It had to be done. I do sympathize with Edgar though… XD

          • TwilightDreamer

            yeah, I don’t want him to get into too much trouble.

  • uh oh

  • Endreas Yohannes

    Oh, so that journal was FLEANCE’S fanfics.

    • Morbidprince

      LOLOL doomed on more than one level

  • Keys2tkingdom

    -Sees Fleace’s expression along with the mood lighting.-

    • Morbidprince

      JURASSIC PARK MEME!!!!!!!!! <3<3<3

  • Axel Reno Eiserman

    Uh oh! Run for it, Edgar!

  • I WAS WARNING ALL OF YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *dies* DX

  • Sanu Wolff
    • Morbidprince

      OMG which episode is that from???

      • Sanu Wolff

        I just remember it is from the alternate world box episode XD