• PrinceNolan

    I love the new page :D <3

  • Keys2tkingdom

    Nice page. The flashback/backstory transition is quite good.

    I’d also like to note that the cubs also seem to have more selfish reasons to pledge them selves to Fleance than in the rough draft, but it is also more in character for them as they seem to want to be acknowledged more in the rough draft.

    • Morbidprince

      Thank you for the feedback on the rough draft/final draft comparison!
      When I read through the rough draft it seemed like these two didn’t have a purpose, and not as experience, I’m glad the change is working out better! :)

  • Kit the Coyote

    They’re so cute!!!

  • TwilightDreamer

    I’m sure there’s more to these two than they’re letting on, most likely in over their heads…but still very cute :)

  • Sanu Wolff

    I just wanna glomp them…..anyone else?….*squee*

  • Sheyn Beck

    So cute!!!!!! I agree with Ice. It’s hard to believe those cubs are gladiators!!!!!