• TwilightDreamer

    This part really breaks my heart… :( poor Venus.

    • Sanu Wolff

      Indeed……there is no worse pain than mother being told she must have her child destroyed.

  • GrellFTW

    OH god, I am like… the feels of this part again, and its just… God, having her baby… There are really no words.

  • Keys2tkingdom

    Heart-wrenching is good term for moments like this. There is no warmth or comfort in this scenario. Venus must be shattering on the inside; her child has been condemned, her brother isn’t offering help, and the person she loves isn’t there to help share the burden. As Grell said, “There really are no words”.

    • Morbidprince

      Thank you! It means a lot to hear that the emotion I’m trying to convey is coming through nicely! I think you understand what I mean when I say, sometimes you work so long and so hard on a painting you stopped seeing it with emotion, but just colours.

  • Jay

    I’ve been MIA for a little while. Lots of new pages!
    My gosh, the color really adds a lot more depth to these scenes.
    I love the way that Theo’s jaw is clenched in the first panel, but his eyes are hidden. My heart goes to Venus, but even more for Theo because as a protector, he is now powerless to protect his sister from this.
    Dina, your comic slays me with the feelings it evokes.

    • Morbidprince

      Thanks Jay! I’m so happy these pages are adding more to the original with all my colouring!! I was worried about how I colour but I”m glad it’s turning out good XD XD XD
      I didn’t play the emotion card enough first time around, hopefully this is fixed thie time around!

      • Jay

        It is definitely fixed. I feel it much more. The color helps a bunch too because you get more of an idea of the complete facial expressions.

  • Sheyn Beck

    Oh. My. God!!!! Imagine how helpless Venus must feel right now!!!!! I wish I were there & could change the story.

    • Morbidprince

      AAWW thanks Sheyn!