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Ch 5 – 7 – Died at the Wrong Time

I think the biggest mistake in the rough draft is that I never really stated the goal of the Serpents. and what they want to do with Fleance.

Anyways plot thickens O_o  And shirt goes on :)

Incase you forgot who Theo was cause it has been awhile in webcomic time :)

Also what happened to him.

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  • KiannaLeigh

    WOW! That is really … really … not evil sounding. ‘Cause yea you’re gonna scarifice someone, but restoring a perfect world and ended oppression doesn’t seem so bad. Whelp, maybe you guys won’t get your asses handed to you after all.

    • Morbidprince

      Wait and see! I always say the worst villains are the ones who thinks they are the good guys >:)

      • KiannaLeigh

        IDK man. That whole way the current serpents are treated comes off as some Lawful Neutral bullshit and I’m not with that. Overthrow the system.

  • Sumi

    It SOUNDS like a wonderful thing but what exactly IS a perfect world and what will happen to everyone when you do restore it? I propose Cleatus answers my questions with his shirt off. It um…helps me stay focused? O//O

    • Morbidprince

      You ask very good questions! And anyone that is going to answer them needs to have their shirt off O3O

  • TwilightDreamer

    Aawww….shirt goes on… :(
    aaah!! I mean….ehem, awesome plot line! But someone better keep an eye on those cubs, this guy already got to Timmy, we don’t want any more falling under his control.

    • Morbidprince

      I need to plan for more no shirt time for future pages :x
      Thank you :D and yes cubs, watch out! >_<

  • kymyit

    very good page!! *^*

    • Morbidprince

      Thank you :D

  • Everything makes so much more sense now! Though I did always like Cleatus’ mystery and secret motives.

    • Morbidprince

      Thanks Flane! Not to worry about that, he will always have secret motives :D wait and see

  • ZHODY

    *gasps* The cubs!